{"id":5654,"date":"2011-10-05T10:15:11","date_gmt":"2011-10-05T14:15:11","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/fashion.parsons.edu\/?p=5654"},"modified":"2018-06-26T10:27:00","modified_gmt":"2018-06-26T14:27:00","slug":"dear-runway-reviewers-part-2-xoxo-fashion-publishing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/parsons.edu\/bfafashion\/dear-runway-reviewers-part-2-xoxo-fashion-publishing\/","title":{"rendered":"Dear Runway Reviewers, part 2. xoxo, Fashion Publishing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a rel=\"attachment wp-att-5655\" href=\"http:\/\/fashion.parsons.edu\/2011\/10\/05\/dear-runway-reviewers-part-2-xoxo-fashion-publishing\/imgres-1-2\/\"><img fetchpriority=\"high\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-5655\" src=\"http:\/\/fashion.parsons.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/10\/imgres-11.jpeg\" alt=\"\" width=\"258\" height=\"196\" \/><\/a>Paris fashion week means we&#8217;re scouring the runway reviews in Fashion Publishing. Yesterday we live blogged the results of a discussion regarding what we love to see reviewers do; today comes the &#8220;needs improvement&#8221; category. Pull all of these tips together and it&#8217;s a tall order for any blogger, but choose one or two and we&#8217;ll click &#8220;Follow&#8221; in \u00a0a split second&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>I hate it when the reviewer just rants about something he or she didn\u2019t like as if trying to convince others to have the same opinion.<\/p>\n<p>-A.J. Jimenez<\/p>\n<p>I don\u2019t like it when a review focuses too much on one single piece in a collection. I think every piece functions as a whole with the others and has been placed in this particular spot for a reason.<\/p>\n<p>-Laura Gallon<\/p>\n<p>I don\u2019t like it when a writer decides a designer hasn\u2019t translated their inspiration well, but doesn\u2019t provide an explanation. What is the design inspiration? Can I know as the reader?<\/p>\n<p>-Kiki Oparah<\/p>\n<p>Don\u2019t forget to contextualize what is being reviewed. Who created it, when, where, and why?<\/p>\n<p>-Maria Elena Pombo<\/p>\n<p>Don\u2019t use words for words\u2019 sake. Repetition is no fun, but throwing in adjectives to make the word seem fancy is the worst of both worlds. It\u2019s okay to use a thesaurus, but don\u2019t go crazy, and please make sure the dictionary is close by as well!<\/p>\n<p>-Julia Scinto<\/p>\n<p>I hate it when reviews are all opinion; let the reader decide!<\/p>\n<p>-Becca Blasdel<\/p>\n<p>I hate it when reviewers use higher vocabulary to enhance the article, rather than the content.<\/p>\n<p>-Alexandra Vercruysse<\/p>\n<p>I dislike when reviews do not review shows fairly, or understand a designer\u2019s overall aesthetic. I don\u2019t really want to hear about your personal opinion unless it has to do with the show.<\/p>\n<p>-Mary Margaret Holma<\/p>\n<p>I hate PR voice, especially when it comes to word usage like \u201ca must see\u201d or \u201cbreathtaking\u201d Also, when reviewers name drop.<\/p>\n<p>-Yvette Martinez<\/p>\n<p>Time is so limited these days, so a one minute video explaining the collection with visuals is so much more amazing and will capture the audiences better than \u201ccontent.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>-Gina Baldwin<\/p>\n<p>I hate when reviewers use a slew of redundant adjectives: the bright white glorious light\u2026<\/p>\n<p>-Rebecca Rubin<\/p>\n<p>Fashion should be fun. Even if you don\u2019t know how to pronounce Thakoon or Yves Saint Laurent, fashion reviews should reach out to everyone.<\/p>\n<p>-Lauren Sanchez<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Paris fashion week means we&#8217;re scouring the runway reviews in Fashion Publishing. 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